Wednesday, March 16, 2011

WIP it Wednesday

This is my second edition of WIP it Wednesday and I thought it only fair. Last week I introduced Nash from PIN DOWN (tentative title) so now it's Alexis' turn :). She didn't start out fiesty and snarky. Really. She just developed that way, but I'm having a lot of fun with it. Nash doesn't really know what to do with her. Well, he does...but perhaps that's for another day :). ENJOY!

     “So, you got a name?” he asked.
     She lifted her chin ever so slightly. “Alexis. My friends call me Lexi. You? You can call me Alexis.”
     Ouch.
     He laughed. Again with the beat skipping thing. What was up with that?
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8 comments:

  1. UnknownMarch 16, 2011 at 6:58 PM

    She's gonna be a great heroine. Looking forward to this one being published. :)

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  2. Kaye ManroMarch 16, 2011 at 9:18 PM

    I like your whip!
    Your heroine sounds like a handful!

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  3. Dreama26March 16, 2011 at 10:34 PM

    Kaily, you're going to make me break a rule here - never read romance/erotica where the lead character shares to name of one of my girls...LOL Other than that - can't wait!

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  4. Kaily HartMarch 16, 2011 at 10:46 PM

    Thanks, Amber!

    Kaye, yeah she's a handful and so much fun to write.

    Oops, Dreama LOL. For most of the book she's referred to as 'Lexi'? It's how she thinks of herself. Hope that helps!

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  5. Rula SinaraMarch 17, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    Love it! Full of sass ;)

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  6. Dreama26March 17, 2011 at 9:27 PM

    That works since DH banned us from calling her Lexi :-)

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  7. Kaily HartMarch 19, 2011 at 4:37 PM

    Rula, sass she has. Suprised the heck out of me. I didn't intend for her to be like that, but when she ran into Nash and he gave her some attitude that's what came back.

    Great, Dreama. She doesn't much like "Alexis" anyways. :)

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  8. Shelley MunroMarch 19, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    Nice! I love the hero's reaction too.

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